A passable effort, now, as Rex says sort that saddle out, adjust that rear chain, get rid of those appalling crimp connectors which stick out like a sore thumb, and are those rusty nuts I see?
Keep at it lad.
No old bike should need connectors in any run of cable except at the ends. just run one length of cable back to front, for each application, preferably in black wire. NEATLY.
More nitpicking.
where the HT had it running?
that fuel pipe needs changing asap preferably for a copper pipe.