Hi SHM,
Can I ask if you had the engine running before you replaced these parts? There are things to check if you did not.
Also, the publication you want is "The Villiers Engine," author B E Browning, and published by C Arthur Pearson Ltd. Frankly the Pitmans book by Cyril Grange is nice to have but nowhere near as useful as Browning. It was first published in 1949 and as you have a prewar engine an early edition will suit fine.
As a long time Villiers operator my regular routine with any Villiers engine I obtain is to automatically replace the coil no matter what the claimed history. Its such a common problem for a coil to test well but fall off when hot that I no longer bother checking. I just replace and that's that.
The pre war points box can easily be assembled out of sequence. If the various insulating washers and wire leads are out of sequence the lot shorts out and no spark. Browning will carefully take you through this.
Finally, there are several tweaks that can be used to improve reliability. These were mainly developed by the trials fraternity. They are worth while.
Cheers,